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Please carry on with your diary entry.

 

If you have finished it, you need to use the checklist of features (posted yesterday) to help you revise and redraft.

  • read your writing aloud and see how many of the features you have included
  • look for places to add any that are missing to make your text 'sound' more like a diary than a story
  • finally, carry out a technical edit, making sure that your punctuation, grammar and spellings are thoroughly checked.

Please email your finished versions to me at:

sarahk@iford-kingston.e-sussex.sch.uk

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