Please carry on with your diary entry.
If you have finished it, you need to use the checklist of features (posted yesterday) to help you revise and redraft.
- read your writing aloud and see how many of the features you have included
- look for places to add any that are missing to make your text 'sound' more like a diary than a story
- finally, carry out a technical edit, making sure that your punctuation, grammar and spellings are thoroughly checked.
Please email your finished versions to me at: